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Main page Page title: Quote:
AmigaFive - Wothy of OS4
Wothy = Worthy?
Sentence 1: Quote:
...processors (aka the G5) to the AmigaOne's. Finally...
Shouldn't be an apostrophe in "AmigaOnes"; may sound better expanded to be "to the AmigaOne family of computers" or somesuch
about.php The "mailto:" link (faq@amigafive.us) does not end in the right place.
FAQ Quote:
per 6-12 monthes (IT has not yet been decided)
Months, and lowercase "it" (or perhaps replace with "this")
Apart from these few bits, it's pretty good - it may be worth adjusting the layout to make it more readable, and perhaps changing the "about" page so that it is a brief abstract summary of the detail, rather than duplicating chunks of text.
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